Fangala the Flying Feline

Hey, Kitty. Wow, a Warriors fic. I haven't read one of these in a while...and I think there's a reason why. Personally, I think Erin Hunter ruined what she had ...

Yay! I'm so happy you posted the next part. Okay, here we go. First off, I thought this chapter was really choppy. It moved from one scene to another too ...

AAAYYYRRRAAA! Why are you so incredible? I still can't believe how eloquent your prose is. Curdled moonlight...sheer genius. There is nothing wrong with this. Every line is pure and piercing, ...

Nice. Good imagery, flow, and emotion. However, I don't see the deeper meaning behind this, other than your narrator experiencing pain. The coldness is slowly seeping in, Fearful thoughts soon ...

Because the bear stole something, and then the guy got all angry and went crazy...um, yeah. I guess I make weird connections.

Wow. This was very random and wonderful. It reminds me of the time we took my little sisters to the mall to see Santa. When we got the picture back, ...

Haha! This is amazing! It's so wonderfully demented and random--absolutely perfect. Your characters are realistic and funny, and your first sentence is just about as gripping as they come. Personally,

Um...I think flabbergasted has two Bs. Thanks for the comments and suggestions, everybody. I've been meaning to edit this for a long time, so I think I'll do that now.

Thanks, choco. I always thought that line was a little weird. And BBB, you never write anything bad! I love all your writing; you're incredible.

Oops, I said uncle. I meant great-grandfather. Sorry!

Well, let me start by saying I was glad to see more than one paragraph in this chapter. However, I find the elipsis unessecary after the first sentece. It makes ...

Oh, wow. This is truly wonderful. The beginning of the world is such an interesting theme; I've played with it a lot. When I read this, my heart got all ...

Please please please review!

Hello again. I'm glad to see part two up. Anyway, I must say I'm slightly peeved at the length. This really isn't a chapter. At most it's the blurb on ...

Whoa, I can't believed no one's reveiwed this yet! This is incredible. Gray skies, the rain in my eyes Rushing out of those halls You brushed my cheek, gentle It ...